Those who only can say something and always make vacant comments are not practical. They just say and not do. They are unfit for the modernization. They are harmful to our country. And there are so many such people. So we should have a thorough refermation just as we are doing now. We should improve our people's virgin and teach them to do more things than to say. （这两段为评论）

　　评论:内容切题,包括图画的全部信息;比较清楚地表达其内涵,文字基本连贯;句式有一定变化,句子结构和用词无重大错误,文章长度符合要求.本作文得10分.

　　第三篇

　　The carton shows us the messages conveyed. Today, we see messages conveyed in our life, this like the cartoon picture, the hen's promise, the hen's egg who are ensured the egg should be all the age things.

　　From the cartoon, we see this recovered some problem. Some promise raised in our social. Firstly, some produties and some companies in order to gain profits, they nelected the peoples's hope and ieads. A serval proty says produce a large of by profitable. Secondly, some unit long for advance in some unite and factory, they seledom songs highly songs, which keep thier majority conditions, this generally made wrong measure to deal with our goverment, our people. Thirdly, this observes let's unpleasured and worried. This cheat factors bring up troulbes in people's life, the people don't know the massages conveyed is true or not. The messages conveyed is conveyed, or isn't conveyed.

　　In my opinion that this observes large dangerous our life, the messages conveyed isn't conveyed, and the messages conveyed bring not conveyed. My comments that we improve and critics this observes, Our goverment and our solical must highly deal with this promblem, Our people must save this wrong action, let messages conveyed truely bring our life, let our solical have actually improved this problem, In order to our future.（10分,本题在于结构好,使阅卷老师"一不留神"就给了高分.）

　　第四篇

　　From this cartoon, I laugh at the hen keep promises that she ought to do it. Hence, I think that many compnaies keep their promises like this now. Hens should lay eggs like this instead of keeping this promises.

　　As Chinese economy is advancing, the commodity become rich. At the same time a lot of products that are not qualified one sold in market places. Although those products do great harm to people, the cases are encouraged by some admistrations because renevues can be gained from this. People complain this deeply.

　　As a result, many companies assure people that their products and services are qulified. Consumers are all puzzled by those cases. Why do so many companies keep their promises that they should do?

　　It is true that companies may show their advertisement, but they should not have done less than what they have promised. Companies should do their works honestly.（8分）

　　第五篇

　　PROMISE

　　From the cartoon, we can see a hen promises that her eggs are in good qualities. At first sight, you may busrt into laughing, but do you realize what's meaning it hints? （cartoon）