When it comes to medical care in china, we know there are many problems. In these problems, the higher cost and the diffculty to see a doctor are the important ones. What is the reason? With the development of society and the advancement of people’s stander of living, the old system can’t adpate it. It is emergency to reform it.

　　In my opinion, first, our country need cost more money in medical care and built more public hospital, in order that every patient can be cured. Second, we can built some high stander hospital to offter some special people. Third, we must promote doctor’s technology and reduce drug price.

　　If we work hard, I believe we will be a good tomorrow.

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